Whole document - final draft

Here is the final version :)
Great work everyone!












I hopw I have proofed the correct version. I did not go over the appendix again. I "tweeked" on objective to make it match the generative strategies et al... but feel free to ignore me if you don't agree.
Rose



Hi everyone,
Here is the final draft.
I just need to add the group evaluation comments; I'll be doing that soon and will post the final version of the doc here.
If you have any comments, send them asap :)
thanks!
Peg


Hi All.. I need to get to my daughter as she is arriving soon. I have reviewed to page 8 and picked up a few more errors. i've tried to post it but it says there are errors. i don't have time to deal with it right now. Will be back in about an hour. Rose





Hi team,
Here is the whole assignment - so you can look over the appendix.
I will now look at your suggestions for the body of the text, make changes, and then come back to see if there are edits for the appendix as well.
thanks,
Peg




references look fine to me.





Hi everyone,



Here is the paper with the reference page.
I think the APA is good.... but please have a look.
If you think the webpage should be cited differently, please let me know.
thanks,
Peg


Hi Team,

Our project is wonderful!
I have gone through the doc and inserted comments at points I thought worth having others ponder but I am not married to the ideas ;) Please review my comments in the document below:






Hello Team,
Here is the body of the text, ready for you to look over.
There are a couple of lines/words I was wondering about, and I have highlighted these.
Reference list and appendix will follow.
Looking forward to your feedback,
Thanks,
Peg




Hello Team,

Here is the draft word doc of our paper, which I still consider a work in progress J

Since our conversation last night I have:

• Finished adding in all the material save for the final paragraphs that Sheena will be submitting
• Made some basic spelling and grammar corrections
• Written the conclusion

Still ahead:

• Add in the final paragraphs
• Edit for content, sentence structure and length
• Thorough proof-read
• Add the ESLBC test website to the list of references
• Cite the Matrix in the appendix
• Mention the rubric in the task analysis
• Confirm that the objectives are consistent throughout the paper
• Complete some formatting in the appendix

Questions I’ve asked and notes I’ve made while working on the document:

• Page 7: do we want to suggest a percentage on the ESLBC test?
• Now that we have changed the length of the course to 20 hours, is it still properly balanced in a package that will take 40-50 hours to complete?
• I have some additional questions that will be easier to ask during the Skype call

As noted above, there are still details that need attending to. I have booked today to continue with the editing. Talk to you at 11am!
Thanks,
Peg

Sheena has added the last bits of additional material below:

Resources and Materials v1.0.docx

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Development Plan v1.0.docx

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